View Full Version : ny new rap

05-15-2009, 03:42 AM
i like to come up wit rapz every now and then

From the womb to the tomb
i spend all night on my 360 playing doom
when i rap i drop bombz day go boom!
I been rappin sinz i was in diapers,
when it rains on dem hoes, they gonna need some windsheild wipers
i got so much bling they call me mr ice
my rap are tight cuz i put them in a vice!

then some shotty was sittin up i nmy lunch table, i was gonna holla at er, i said HEY SHOTTY! then she said to her friend, im sorry, wat he say, i dont listen to loosers

this bitch was white ghetto

so nex time she doz that, im going to get up, walk up to her and say

" Look bitch, you said you doent listen to loosers, so i guess you cant her yourself talk, so you speak to me like that again, im gonna find out who ya are, im gonna drive to your crib, and im finna get my gat, and bust a cap on yo muthafuckin ass, do i make myself clear cracka!?!?

som people i swearz gonna get it one of deez days

CuttyC 3.3
05-15-2009, 03:51 AM
word son =B

05-15-2009, 03:58 AM
??? am i supposed to imagine the beat?

05-15-2009, 01:51 PM
I tried rapping it in my head by the second half of that just doesn't have great fluency at all to be honest. Maybe you should make a youtube video and rap for us, like your other songs.

PS Real gangsters can spell correctly.

05-15-2009, 07:21 PM
I tried too.. All I got was a knocking sound

05-23-2009, 03:04 AM
Fizzle's rap is like a Ford with 4 flats on a dirt-track

Humpin' and bumpin' on badly written words
Jumpin' and pumpin' without getting in touch
Speakin of hoe's as if he knew 'em
The poor fella wasn't even be able to screw 'em
Singing a tune turned out to be too much trouble
So he typed down the words on the double
Rap... Rap... Rap... now I sound like a duck...

I mean.... if one REALLY wants to scrape some dirt together, one doesn't need much time or effort to do so...